Sleepy Monday Mornings

I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience. Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like and why.

1.Getting up on Monday mornings can be very difficult, especially when you went to bed late last night. My Mum makes me get up at 5.30am. WHAT A NIGHT-MARE!

2.Can you guess what time I went to bed? Well I went to bed very late. When I woke up I was extremely tired, my sister was hassling me and saying “GET UP”!

3.Did you know that other kids my age needs approximately 9 hours of sleep. There is 52 Mondays in a year, yep that’s right 52 Mondays. I really hate getting up.

Me

I like running on the lawn.
But I don’t like bees.

I like black jandals.
But I don’t like gumboots.

I like swinging on the monkey bars.
But I don’t like falling on the bark.
I like cooking fish fingers.
But I don’t like getting burnt.

I like spooky stories.
But I don’t like getting scared.

I like animals.
But I don’t like creepy crawly spiders.

I like sleeping.
But I don’t like waking up.

I like my comfortable bed.
But I don’t like the floor.

Kingfishers

Do you know what this bird is called? Well its called a Kingfisher.

Kingfishers live in the wild. The kingfishers plumage is brightly coloured and also soft and feathery. Kingfishers eat fish, lizards, frogs, mammals, centipedes, spiders, worms, insects and grass-hoppers. The Maori name for Kingfisher is Kotare.

How To Find Legal Images

Do you know how to find legal images?

1. Put in the key word in google.

2. Click on images then go to advanced search.

3. Click on labels for reuse.

4. Select the image you want.

My Holiday

Can you guess what beach I went to in the holidays? Well in the holidays I went to the Point-England beach.

It was a nice and sunny day, so my mum suggested we should go. I was excited. But my sister was more excited than me.

My mum, dad, sisters, brother and I walked on the cracked shells along the foot-path. As we were walking we got to a green bridge, then we threw some rocks in the water. SPLAT!

Finally we got to the beach. I didn't want to go for a swim so I just collected shells. I was having lots of fun but then we had to go home, I didn't want to.

I felt really tired when I got home.

New Class, New Teachers

Hi my name is Taeshell, I am a year 6 in room 17. My teachers names are Miss Garden and Miss Thompsom.

Taeshell-One line Authors Story

I can see kites dancing through the air.

I am with the Silver Ferns.

I can hear voices in my head they talk to me.

I can smell Ghost Perfume.

I am at the movies.

I am shopping.