Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Malala Nominated For Nobel Peace Prize

Kiwi Kids News

Malala Nominated For Noble Peace Prize

Malala Yousafzai
She has been nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize
She’s from Pakistan but is in England at the moment recovering
We will find out at the end of October if she won
Because she was fighting for education for schoolgirls in Pakistan

Rewrite the article in your own words

Malala Nominated For Nobel Peace Prize
Malala Yousafzai was nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize, because she was fighting for schoolgirls education in Pakistan. The Taliban decided to try and kill her, because they didn't like what she was doing. She ended up with serious injuries. She’s is now in England recovering, and can’t go back to Pakistan because its to dangerous. We will find out in late October if she has won.

Opinion and Why:
What do you think about this news and why
I think that she is a kind and caring person, willing to fight for schoolgirls education in Pakistan.

What are some questions this article has prompted that you may like to find out the answers to
Why is their law so different to ours?
What is schooling like in Pakistan?
Why aren't girls allowed to go to school?

Friday, October 25, 2013

My Own Mihi

This is my own mihi that I have created, there is the english translation too.

Kia ora koutou
Greetings to you all

kua hui mai nei
who have gathered here

ki tenei kura
to this school

ki te mau mai
to bring

i te aroha
the love

ka nui te koa
great is the happiness

mo to koutou kaha
for your support

ki te aromai
in attending

ki te ako
to learn

i nga kaupapa
the topics

e pa ana ki tenei wananga
concerning this school of learning

My Four Shot Movie

T.S Four Shot Movie from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

My Four Shot Movie Storyboard

A girl types in google "Chocolate Milkshake", because she was thirsty. She then reaches in the screen and out comes a chocolate milkshake.

Monday, October 14, 2013

Immersion Assembly Writing Sample

We were given 40 minutes to write about a good memory, then put it up on our blog.

Immersion Assembly

The hall was filled with students, teachers and even parents that had came to watch the immersion assembly. Everybody wanted to know what they were going to be learning about this term. We all ended up finding out that“What In The World Is Going On” was our topic for this term. Excitement quickly travelled around the hall.

Finally it was time to watch the performances that the teachers had prepared for the first day of term 4. May I tell you that they were pretty funny, every show was funny in their own way. When it was team 3’s turn they had an amazing show and even handed out pancakes.

There were heaps of different shows about different things, which made it interesting. Overall the immersion assembly was really funny. “What In The World Is Going On”, now that’s something to investigate.

My two goals- Use more interesting words, Show not tell.
My two things I did well- Used variety of sentences, had good punctuation.