I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience. Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like and why.
1.Getting up on Monday mornings can be very difficult, especially when you went to bed late last night. My Mum makes me get up at 5.30am. WHAT A NIGHT-MARE!
2.Can you guess what time I went to bed? Well I went to bed very late. When I woke up I was extremely tired, my sister was hassling me and saying “GET UP”!
3.Did you know that other kids my age needs approximately 9 hours of sleep. There is 52 Mondays in a year, yep that’s right 52 Mondays. I really hate getting up.
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ReplyDeletebecause i like how you put My Mum makes me get up at 5.30am. WHAT A NIGHT-MARE!
I like the way you put the numbers on the front before you write.I appreciate your writing and the full stop because you put them in the right place.
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DeleteI appreciate your writing and the full stop because you put them in the right place.
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ReplyDeletebecause I like how you put My Mum makes me get up at 5.30am. WHAT A NIGHT-MARE!